Perfection, is the Christian's pride. The beauty of man, is his thoughts. Great job Chan.., and THANKS for sharing!

I fall madly in love wih this poem, specailly
"all these voices constantly replayed in my head..
all i wanted it to do was to just...
stop..."The subject was bone chilling, and the way you put it was writing perfection, 100/100

I read the poem over again, and I couldn't help thinking about my best friend in the lines, I believe this poem will truly make a difference and change someone's lives, maybe even save someone's life. OUTSTANDING POEM

I read the poem over again, and I couldn't help thinking about my best friend in the lines, I believe this poem will truly make a difference and change someone's lives, maybe even save someone's life. OUTSTANDING POEM

I read the poem over again, and I couldn't help thinking about my best friend in the lines, I believe this poem will truly make a difference and change someone's lives, maybe even save someone's life. OUTSTANDING POEM