That Sound (Haiku)

by Areeba   Jul 28, 2012


Over umbrella
Raindrops fall making that sound
Scary and soothing

* first haiku ever, just experimented......a big thank you to Mr. Khalid for their kind help ^_^ *

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  • 12 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    I love haikus, such a beautiful picture with little words. I enjoyed it (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Now the poem became marvellous. The syllable count is perfect. Nice work

  • 12 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    I actually very much enjoyed it. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Very true, good job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Omar

    That is so true. Lol

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