Comments : Dark Soul

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This could also be put in dark section :) Theres alot of penned pain here which the reader can easily feel in each line. write on.

    • 12 years ago

      by Watercolourz

      Honestly I didn't think where I could put it at the time, but thank you for the advice, will keep it in mind for future works :).

  • 12 years ago

    by Janis

    Really awesome metaphors as always there, great choice of words too and I love that it`s not another simple poem, but it actually has a deeper meaning and you portrait it perfectly ^^. Great job keep it up mate ^^

    • 12 years ago

      by Watercolourz

      Thank you mate, surprisingly I wrote it while listening to metal out of all things -.-.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I agree with Janis.I really liked your piece.