by Wild flower
Wow another perfect amazing piece by you, love it^_^ |
by Naughtymouse
Oh syrup i really like this, the form is really cool with the repetition and i think it the first poem i've read about a hooker !! Wicked write as always sweets x |
by Naughtymouse
Oops lol |
by Naughtymouse
Errr sorry lol |
by Naughtymouse
Ummmm yeah how many posts did i do lol |
by Naughtymouse
See how this hooker rhyme. Got me excited 5 posts lmao! |
by Maple Tree
Ben- your on your celly arnt you??? ha ha ha |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow, I really enjoyed this. What a very clever form of poetry you have chosen. This really shows off your talent. |
by Tara Kay
I can't comment on your work Andrea, cos it just blows me away... |
by Hellon
Irst of all..and before I forget...has Scott Street got anything to do with where this lady..er walks? and...you speak of judges so is it near a court?...probably not as I did get the impression that the judges were just normal passers by in your poem but....this brought such a giggle to me as I recalled an event that happened when I was an office junior in Glasgow. Blythswood Square was (don't know about now) a place where prostitues were known to hang out and...it didn't have to be night time. It's also a well known place for law firms to have their offices. There we were at 5pm all tumbling down the stair after work and the head secretary's boyfriend had slowed down his car to collect her when one of these ladies wrenched the door open and asked..."Hey John...what would you like?" I can still see the look on the the secretary and boyfriends face to this day....it was hilarious!!! |