Burning skin

by Baby Rainbow   Jul 28, 2012


The shock is instant
as it rushes through my arm.
Pain is the consequence
for being who I am.

I have to be punished,
I need to feel this pain.
Burn away the memories
with the heat from the flame.

Watching my skin turn red,
feeling the blood rush through.
There is no better release
than a wild flame burning you.

The desperation, the urge,
the power to damage my skin.
I need to feel this torture
to block the pain within.

Saffie
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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is raw emotion and tells us of how you deal with your pain. Everyone has their own way of coping with their pain...some healthy and unhealthy. I don't think burning yourself is the way to go, just like I don't agree with cutting, however it is your body and your choice. I'm not trying to offend you, I hope you don't take it that way. I just think there could be other releases you could try without doing physical harm to yourself? Like I said, I mean no offense and certainly am not judging you in anyway. You are a wonderful writer and I can tell a very sweet person who has had a troubled past. I know it haunts you and you need to escape it so you do something more drastic to take your mind off of it. :(

    I'm glad you shared this poem, it's so powerful.

    Keep writing, Saffie!!

    • 12 years ago

      by Baby Rainbow

      Hey just to stop any confusion I do not cut or harm, I used to but have not done it for many years. This was a poem I wrote a while ago while remembering what it was like and how it helped. So no need to worry, honest :) xx

  • 12 years ago

    by karyssa smith

    I understand what you mean. I use to do the same thing to create a distraction, to cause a greater pain so i dont feel my hurting heart. good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I know exactly how you feel...
    hugs.

    This is a piece of poetry that doesnt need fancy words and metaphors because it shows emotion in its simplicity, while being powerful and flowing perfectly.

    hugs and love
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This reminds e of a cutter releasing the pain
    We all have a dark side and release our feelings and pain in many different ways.
    What makes it even woerse, nobody will
    hear our cry

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    There is no better release
    than a wild flame burning you
    Oh! What a strange feeling you need to try!
    Well penned piece of hurt, lol.
    I enjoyed the feelings.