Snowflakes of your whispering (club comp)

by Khalid M Darwish   Jul 28, 2012


YOU
talked
in my ear
Left me prints
Like snowflakes
falling on heart as
scattered cotton seeds
Telling enchanting words
which can turn over Pyramids
And enforce the Liberty Statue
to raise both open hands, praying
And heartbeats accelerate to double
As if gazelles' speed exceeds that of puma
Next day I was walking and talking to myself
All the day I was thinking of you, from all sides
Of your lips biting lips, as two halves of strawberry
The touch of your fingers, the very thin like food forks
Your body folds, resembling subsequent intervening waves
Your slow walking resulting a symphony of harmonious sound
Your beating laughing, like a twittering pair of happy heaven birds

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  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Khalid.....This is one of my favourite writes from you my friend, i love the shape but the contecnt is simply outstanding...truely you pen amazes me sometimes :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Typo in the title: "wispering" should be "whispering"

    I really like the shape of the pyramid, great job Khalid!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is indeed a very unique piece Khalid
    to me it was very inspiring and greatly written

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This was different Khalid. I liked the shape of a pyramid and lots of phrases inside your poem were really awesome and Unique :) write on
    Lostlove