This was different Khalid. I liked the shape of a pyramid and lots of phrases inside your poem were really awesome and Unique :) write on
Lostlove

This is indeed a very unique piece Khalid
to me it was very inspiring and greatly written

Typo in the title: "wispering" should be "whispering"

I really like the shape of the pyramid, great job Khalid!

Khalid.....This is one of my favourite writes from you my friend, i love the shape but the contecnt is simply outstanding...truely you pen amazes me sometimes :-)