Wow...this is beautiful Meme. I don't know how all of you come up with things like this :[ All I can do is read in amazement...I am sorry that I have not commented on many of your poems. I think I did one, but I'm not sure...I just get so behind. Just know that you are in my favorites - I love your work even though I do not comment.

This is a perfect heart, I think, or at least the best that you can get using words :] There was one little word that doesn't need to be there...it is the 'a' in the fifth line. I understand though why it is there, and why you would not want to take it out - it would alter your form a little...I would also put a comma between 'abandoned' and 'incomplete' because those are two different adjectives.

I am definitely not trying to ruin your poem! Please forgive me if I sound like that...I am just trying to help. I don't know how you would react to me telling you something like this, but I can imagine that you might get a little frustrated.

Okay, back to your poem. I love how you did this, I cannot say that enough. You talked about your heart being a puzzle piece in someone's puzzle. I think that we all are at one time or another, but some people just have a tendency to throw us out and put in new ones - trying to make them fit. However, this is not how this poem ended...you were happy because you found love, or at least the person in the poem did (I don't know if this is true or not).

If this is true, I wish you all the best :] May you stay in his jigsaw puzzle...

Excellent
5/5

When it comes to the heart it seems
there is always one piece missing to complete the puzzle.
excellent done

@_@!!!!!!!

AMAZING!!!!!!!!

Oh Meme im so in love with this write, the words and flow.are right up my street and the idea of being the last piece in the jigsaw i really loved, really unique and the.shape of the poem os epic. Such a great write and straight into my favs :-)) x

I absolutely adore the heart form, it's so cute and just radiates love before you even begin to read.

I love the jigsaw idea, being the last piece to finish the puzzle. So clever.

Love it <3

This is amazing. iLove the idea!

This is lovely and so creative. I love the heart shape and the idea of looking for the missing piece only to realise it was you.

I just have a tiny suggestion with this part:
"It wasn't until earlier tonight, when
I stumbled over some little words
I finally realized it. It was me
who played as a last
piece in your
puzzle."

I think it could be rephrased to:
"It wasn't until earlier tonight, when
I stumbled over some little words
that I finally realized it was me
who played the last
piece of your
puzzle."

Just my opinion though. I enjoyed reading this piece. Keep writing :)

Oh this is my second shaped poem I have read today. How beautiful. you have done a lovely job and made it look so easy like it all just spilled out and landed this way. Very pretty poem :)

^_^ speechless :D nd i love da way u wrote it in a heart shape

Aw, Meme!
Loved it.
Even though, the heart is a bit ...maf3os?
I liked the simile too. You're a star.

A really sweet poem and yet so simple :)

Nice

This is the type of poem I love to read.. I'll just say thank u for making me read this tonight...