Motivational BS

I think you have the potential to be a great poet. You have the essential elements. The word choices are well sought out and it shows in the poem.
I didn't like the ending and wish it were more hopeful. But I don't have to like the ending for it to be a well written and well received poem. However I would edit the last 2 paragraphs, the flow seems a little stunted. Otherwise, it is nicely done. Hang in there you have more that needs tapping into, most times you cannot force it.

Again I loved this one because it can be taken in both versions of a conversation with yourself or just at society in general.

It is so hard to feel motivated and listen to people who try to force you into happiness. You cannot just feel something and do something when your heart does not agree.

Good write, although it is sad you feel this way. x

Never give up on yourself. People are
loaded with bs, you need to seperate
yourself from it. Nobody wants to be alone
but if that what it takes so be it.
You are a wonderful person.

I really love your life pieces, how you write them, the words choice, and everything..
This one too is a great as usual, love it..