The real me

by Baby Rainbow   Jul 29, 2012


Saffie scared,
scared of talking
scared of being alone while walking.

Scared of noises
scared of choices,
scared of hearing all the voices.

Scared of adults
scared of children
scared of all the monsters winning.

Scared of people walking away
scared of people if they stay.

Saffie scared
scared of crying
scared of people I love dying.

Saffie scared
scared of pain
scared of being hurt again.

Saffie
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  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    GASPS!!!!!!!!

    HOLY ******!!!!!

    I gotta say Baby R i am soooo in awe of this write, you've probably gathered im a sucker for rhyming but i found this to be nothing short of blisfully wonderful!

    The meaning of the piece is not lost on me and i hope you are ok, my inbox is always open.

    But i found the repetition and the flow in this piece just epic!! Seriously one of my favourite rhyming pieces ever!! going straight into my favourites and staying there so i Can read it and wish i wrote it lol.

    Just got yourself a new fan :-)

    Amazing write xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This sounds like being scared of life overall.
    There is nothing wrong with that. All we can do is give it our best and try to do right in life. We have to endure pain, we make mistakes, we put our trust in the wrong people, we make bad choices, all that is part
    of life. We learn lessons from it.Never give
    up on yourself, you are only granted one
    life and it is the most precious there is.
    excellent written