His Uniqueness

by Sunshine   Jul 29, 2012


He is that laughter that
never finds a tall tree
to hang over-
keeps going...
falling toward me.

A summer kiss that
passes like shy travelers
without stealing a single shot
of my tempted cheeks.

Drives me mad, drives me mad,
oh how I love,
my boyfriend.

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This is cute :)
    I love that you have someone you can be like this with, you know, silly and soppy, it's really romantic and I see he really makes you happy which makes me happy too :)

    xxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    *Giggles*
    i just love to read happy poems from you. And it really shows how much he makes you happy. High five Mr .K :-P

    Luv ya banana xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Oh wow, this is a nice surprise. A short & simple style of writing that I've never seen before from you. Not sure how to explain it but this is different & I love it. So adorable, maybe not the strongest ending if I had to be harsh about something but very lovely. I love the metaphors, they are goregous. So nice to see you share your happiness :)

  • 12 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Beautiful Nana! Simply beautiful! (5)

    ~Harlea

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Lol at Abeds comment. :P

    'passes like shy travelers
    without stealing a single shot
    of my tempted cheeks.'

    I like this.
    I feel it should be pierced up there, somewhere in your profile, haha. It's just so poetic. Makes me realise how clever, swift and charming you and your boyfriend are. A summer kiss. Ok.

    The repetition at the end really, really made me feel like Abed said, a Country song! Loved it. Loved the whole thing except for saying 'my boyfriend', it felt a bit ...slang? :/

    Nice to read you!

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