I had a feeling this was about me.
lol - what a showass I am!

ha
ha

--- Anyway, the 2nd stanza is freakin' awesome...

w the end... it sounds like Country songs!!

beautiful, Nana!

Lol at Abeds comment. :P

'passes like shy travelers
without stealing a single shot
of my tempted cheeks.'

I like this.
I feel it should be pierced up there, somewhere in your profile, haha. It's just so poetic. Makes me realise how clever, swift and charming you and your boyfriend are. A summer kiss. Ok.

The repetition at the end really, really made me feel like Abed said, a Country song! Loved it. Loved the whole thing except for saying 'my boyfriend', it felt a bit ...slang? :/

Nice to read you!

Beautiful Nana! Simply beautiful! (5)

~Harlea

Oh wow, this is a nice surprise. A short & simple style of writing that I've never seen before from you. Not sure how to explain it but this is different & I love it. So adorable, maybe not the strongest ending if I had to be harsh about something but very lovely. I love the metaphors, they are goregous. So nice to see you share your happiness :)

*Giggles*
i just love to read happy poems from you. And it really shows how much he makes you happy. High five Mr .K :-P

Luv ya banana xxx

This is cute :)
I love that you have someone you can be like this with, you know, silly and soppy, it's really romantic and I see he really makes you happy which makes me happy too :)

xxxxx