Risque

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l o v e l y

"Drifting thoughts
of velvety leaves
caress a naked bosom
as I renew my soul,
kissing Eden a thousand times."
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<3

You cant mess up any nature poem.
Perfectly written..

I just don't know how you do it! And i don't know how you manage to come up with such strong title's, they always make me curious but yet seem to fit your poem so well.

The thing I have noticed in your writing is that although you get a sense of your emotion in all your work, when I read your nature poems it is like you are always right there in that moment.

Like in this piece, you wrote it as if you are right there and can describe everything as clear as crystal. For me, I feel like you feel free to be yourself with nature. You can feel your love for her and how you devote your words to her.

Once I read a poem I usually ask myself what word or line stands out to me most. In this one it is the idea of velvet leaves! It makes me want autumn to be here so I can see all the leaves falling and their colour change and texture change.

Brilliant poem, I loves it lots :) x