Falling heart

Lovely little piece

Clouds like smoke rising from the ground,

- add a comma onto the end here.

a place where I have buried my fears and worries,

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a place where I rest in peace.

- add in "a" at the beginning of here.

It is my falling heart.

- full stop at the end here.

Other than the punctuation, the poem itself is really powerful. It holds a lot of imagery and description.

The title is relatable too, we all feel that sense of sadness, loneliness sometimes, when we feel our hearts are so heavy and falling.

I like how you described a few things first, the emotion, and then ended it with showing us what you have described is indeed your heart. I like when this is done in poetry.

Well done.

Small but made a big impact