I'm so happy you posted this! I can't rave enough on how intense this poem feels and is... Its a beautiful... mystical feeling poem... etched with deep emotions....Mercy! a Mixture of wonderfulness!! LOVE IT!

Your thoughts shall bow
to drink the fiery potion
I pour into your wine
glass. And I'll weave a web
of flames over your burning
desires, but your eyes are to
never leave mine.

---This is my favorite stanza, When I read it, it gives me the idea of hypnosis.. look into my eyes and never stop looking.. I had a good imagine in my head lol, I wish I could narrate it with words but its not the same. Well done.

This one deserves the credit it gets, I loved the whole idea of it and how you penned it. Excellent job. X