Comments : Pain in the rain

  • 12 years ago

    by modupe

    Iit is sad and beautiful, i love this piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Very good, Past memories can be awful, but sometimes love can take them away. It is sad because at the beginning, it was mention something like my worries of him leaving you, my thoughts are that perhaps those memories are haunting you so much that you fear that you won't be able to deal with them, and him will leave you. I hope not, love can do wonders.

  • 12 years ago

    by Joseph Boadi

    I am intrigued,the diction,especially the wordplay,content is really catchy and fierce.metaphors on poems.beautiful write

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is so sad and you have been able to create a clear idea about the torture you have to go though with your memories. I can feel your pain and how much you want saved from it.

    Good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kylead

    Ill definitively reread again at some point in time was great but it didn't hold meaning for me readers perspective i suppose when it does tho ill re comment fun read 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this poem !! You done great, and i kept rereading it over and over. I love it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Thank you so much!