Lucid Twilight of Simplicity

by Maple Tree   Jul 30, 2012


It became clear to me,
as a crystal tear drop fell,
that I was created to love you.

Upon a twilight dancing,
you captured a melody
within my captured soul.

Feeling like a lost trinket,
you gave me reasons
to laugh and smile.

A poetic display comes
natural to me, when
writing about you.

I can whisper a thousand words,
hint them with syllabic elegance,
but why should a lady coat feelings
with extravagance, when
simplicity is far more lucid,
as an evening sky.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    What a beautiful poem, it leaves you feeling so warm after reading this and it is amazing how one person can create such an affect on you. Lovely poem xx

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I love this poem,

    I do agree why sugar coat a poem with words for your love one, when simplicity will have the same effect as long as you have written it with love.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This is beautiful, I love the way you ending this, it was just stunning...

    The flow was flawless and every single word hit my heart and made it smile with warmness.

    Just utterly amazing Andrea...
    as always
    xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    When you write him, us readers feel how sincere you are. Love your style. Awesome job..