Comments : Smiles (Tanka)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I obsolutely love it

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Very good, the syllable count is right on!

    I like this poem. Smiles!

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nice message of truth , fitted the style well.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    AMAZING WRITE KHALID!!!!
    I absolutely loved every line!
    my favorite part was

    "All for one and one for all"
    Its a beautiful and powerful way to end this poem!

    So strong and well structured!

    5.5 from me