You smacked it Thomas!!! Powerful write!!
lots of messages circle in my mind with this write.... thats why I LIKE IT!!

I agree, poerful write Thomas

When I read the title, " concrete jungle" the first thing that jumped to my mind was a city.
Because of the word "Concrete" I pictured cement and buildings.. then the jungle.. people.

I like it. It is true the city could be like a jungle.
and I also liked that you used wifi and added different things. Well done.

Ahhhhh creative here Thomas....Loved that you incorporated the web and wi-fi in this piece. Nice spin on it :)

Interesting peice, you can take a lot from this depending on how you look for it. I know if this was read by children it would feel like amonkey going through the tree's in the jungle. Where as the deeper meaning is more of real life and what it is like for you and many others.

Well done, I enjoyed reading this.