by Tara Kay
:( You broke me... |
Sorrowful piece! I lived every word you penned and every tears you dropped. |
by nouriguess
Test. |
by Lostlove1
I loved the questions here Kiddo...thought provoking and heartfelt- I can feel the pleading in this poem and it makes me sad too. <3 |
by Decayed
WHOEVER SEES THIS, OR READS THIS, MUST NOMINATE THIS... |
I have no words, this just has to be your strongest or one of them at least, I am honestly on the verge of tears. So unique, the title too drew me in, and so heartfelt...the fact that you are speaking to your grandpa too, wondering, remembering is just too beautiful. There's just so much pain here, feeling of deep loss, and how change has happened over and over again to your dear country. Flawless flow.......this has just soul-reaching!! I wish I would have read this earlier to vote on it, but it's the weekend here, otherwise you'd have my nomination |