Dandelions Song (Triolet)

You continue to amaze me, ever thing I read from you feels like a new adventure in a way. I believe you are quite brilliant (:

This is so lovely, another new form to me which you have made look interesting, unique and also so beautiful to read. x

You're nature pieces are the best. I also found the separation of 'dande' and 'lion' so creative. Beautiful write.

Dearest dande, lions will cry

scorned by a summers heated kiss

midnight dew drops share a sweet sigh

dearest dande, lions will cry

stars mating, within a dark sky

passion lilies are natures bliss

dearest dande, lions will cry

scorned by a summers heated kiss

I adored how you have separated dande'lions to let the reader explore different interpretations of the meaning of this...such a good idea! This is one of my favourite forms and you've done such a great job with it..just some suggestions... I think it should be summer's and nature's?

You have such a gift writing formed poetry syrup, everytime i read one i love it and think that is amazing .......and then you write another and blow it out the water lol seriously this is just wonderful and i loooooooove it!!!