Ooh, nice Triolet. Never heard of that scheme before. I like it, will probably try it myself soon!

Epic use of flowers and nature, really ambiguous with you seperating "dande" and "lion", causing a new meaning but still retaining the same.

A few pointers, though. If you're looking for plural s (as in multiple dandelions, or multiple lilies, etc) there shouldn't be an apostrophe. So "lions", and "lilies", nor "lion's" and "lily's".

Awesome, I love how this form doesnt seem forced at all. Perfectly written..

OMG loveddd this triolet, hard to write if you ask me, you have to find a perfect line that wont bore the readers since it has to be repeated!

You always nail it girl :) Loved it!

You have such a gift writing formed poetry syrup, everytime i read one i love it and think that is amazing .......and then you write another and blow it out the water lol seriously this is just wonderful and i loooooooove it!!!

Dearest dande, lions will cry

scorned by a summers heated kiss

midnight dew drops share a sweet sigh

dearest dande, lions will cry

stars mating, within a dark sky

passion lilies are natures bliss

dearest dande, lions will cry

scorned by a summers heated kiss

I adored how you have separated dande'lions to let the reader explore different interpretations of the meaning of this...such a good idea! This is one of my favourite forms and you've done such a great job with it..just some suggestions... I think it should be summer's and nature's?

You're nature pieces are the best. I also found the separation of 'dande' and 'lion' so creative. Beautiful write.

This is so lovely, another new form to me which you have made look interesting, unique and also so beautiful to read. x

You continue to amaze me, ever thing I read from you feels like a new adventure in a way. I believe you are quite brilliant (: