Comments : Flowering Tobacco

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Still, I linger for the
    chasing shadows that
    accompany your voice.
    Your whispers in my
    ears; a thunder born in
    the middle of an imaginary
    sky that I created.

    ^ hot damn girl, that was just incredible...loved this analogy, this whole idea behind this piece....the creativity was amazing :) You did so well with this contest!! I kinda wanna nominate this, and I think I will lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I love the idea of chasing shadows - I have a poem called this, and also have used this as user names and email addresses. I think it just 2 words that together give such a powerful image of what the author is feeling.

    Loved the idea of your poem, there was a lot to take out from it, but for me it was the affect someone else can have on you that you may not even be aware of until you become addicted. This can be be in both a good way or a bad way. Again, there is a lot to be taken from this write which is the type of poems I like.

    Well done. x