You are amazing...

I am speechless, Yaki... Speechless... Speechless..... I don't know with what to describe this piece....... Awesomely penned.. everything .. everything!! I wish I had votes left, too! 2 secs ago, Noura.. then this!!!!!

Ill stop this rush of emotions now... this is amazing.

"we spoke for what seem ages,"

This sounds wrong, I'm thinking "seemed like" or "seemed". Now seemed doesn't even feel like a word, but it is, haha!

I love the feel of this poem, the daring openness and vulnerability. My favorite part was definitely the bit about keeping your eyes open, mesmerized. Such a beautiful image!