Saucy Spaghetti, Sweet Time

by Karla   Aug 1, 2012


Saucy Spaghetti, Sweet Time

He was dazed and dazzled,
contemplating her sucking that sizzling,
solid miracle, chomping, and changing it
charmingly, chewing champignons, cheese
and life together as if the whole world could
fit in her frantic fantastic mouth, in that
simple moment of romantic agony and
light dissolution.

Everything seemed to leap onto
her dish and his eagle eyes enslaved every
exciting movement, entangled her in
his luxuriant lucid lust; she was a hungry
beautiful beamy beast, he was the beast itself
beckoning desire to sit at the table and join
them in that Italian restaurant.
(spaghetti was such a sexy thing!)

She giggled gingerly, he gulped and guffawed,
staring at her tenderly, conscious of nothing but
her intangible intensity and intractable innocence.
It was when he realized that hunger was the best sauce.

Karla Bardanza

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  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I don't know why, but spaghetti just became a turn on lol...karla I love your mind and how it works. Your creativeness is just incredible..I can't wrap ,y head around this poem...adding to my favorites!

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    My my, spicy! A really unique write, 5/5!

    mandy :)

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    You won't believe this but I am making spaghetti tonight too...so funny. I already have the ground chicken browned!!

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    Lovely, lusty, light and whimsical. This was so much fun to read. My favorite part was where you wrote,"... chomping, and changing it
    charmingly, chewing champignons, cheese
    and life together..." using alliteration and action verbs quite well so that I could see her, and laugh myself...even through the lust.

    Loved it!

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    This is a fav for sure.