Comments : Saucy Spaghetti, Sweet Time

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I do not believe I will be able to see spaghetti the same way ever again :) Guess what, swear we are having spaghetti tonight
    and I will never be able to eat it without thinking of your poem.

    It was sweet alright.

    Loved it Karla

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    This is a fav for sure.

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    Lovely, lusty, light and whimsical. This was so much fun to read. My favorite part was where you wrote,"... chomping, and changing it
    charmingly, chewing champignons, cheese
    and life together..." using alliteration and action verbs quite well so that I could see her, and laugh myself...even through the lust.

    Loved it!

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    You won't believe this but I am making spaghetti tonight too...so funny. I already have the ground chicken browned!!

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    My my, spicy! A really unique write, 5/5!

    mandy :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I don't know why, but spaghetti just became a turn on lol...karla I love your mind and how it works. Your creativeness is just incredible..I can't wrap ,y head around this poem...adding to my favorites!