Comments : Disaster Date

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    LMAO

    hahahha :')

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This was awesome so unique loved it ...

    It was kind of scary cause i fit the guys description lol

    But yea well good
    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Sorry for the double post

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Lol,

    I thought this was well written and that you accomplished the challenge.

    I also liked that you mention at the end that you need to make a mental checklist that you need a new can of mase.. lol

    I had to look at what mase was but I think it's a pepper spray. The begging part was good, lipstick ? check and pretty much the whole list of checks. haha nice way of starting.

    Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Well written

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Amazing story that I could easily envisage happening :p

    Nice work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You did an awesome job with this one Hannah

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Well done, you done a good job xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Ohhhhhh I voted for yours!! I loved your storytelling skills :-)

    When are you publishing that novel of yours?? Ohh girl you have an amazing way of writing.

    Keep it uppp!

  • Honestly, when I saw the yellow border of 'funny poems' I almost hit the 'back' button, but I endured - and it was worth it.

    Well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    LOL this was seriously a funny story. You have really great descriptive skills and it didn't fail here. I can't stop laughing at the beginning with the mace and then your snippet after condoms, hahaha.

    I've been reading a bunch of your poems and you really have all kinds of sides to you, hahaha. I love it.