Lost Kingdom (Collab)

by Meme & Naughtymouse   Aug 1, 2012


I saw evergreen lemon trees,
dragonflies and honeybees.
Nectareous air all over the place,
ripened tastes are easily traced.

Sereness smiles and anonimity lies
tranquility, where humming birds sigh.
A peace of only few can tell,
the softest sound of a ringing bell.

The jasmine hugs old sand walls,
while fairys bathe in waterfalls.
A place for only kings and queens,
a place for sacred, nestled dreams.

Somewhere only dreams attain,
were only equanimity reigns.
A lost kingdom to be found,
buried under sacred ground.

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By: Meme
And: Naughtymouse
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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    You two just click together so easily. I find that collabs are hard, maybe it's just me?... and sometimes you can tell who wrote what... but not with this one... it's flawless and just flows perfectly.

    MORE, I want more from you two! :D

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      I used to find collabs hard as well, but then you get used to them.
      Honestly, with him its always easy to write. We wrote a lot of collabs together, and I am sure there is still much more to come :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Lovely collab you too, you make it look so easy. This imagery was beautful in each and every stanza. Good going xx

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I think there is only one little typo:

    " while fairys bathe in waterfals."
    It should be ... Waterfalls ?

    other than that, I like your collabs

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Thanks pinky :-)

    And Meme it was a pleasure to write with you as always :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow, what a beautiful and lovely collaboration! I'm in awe!

    You both painted a soothing painting that I longed to part of. I loved all the descriptions and metaphors!

    Stunning! You both should collaborate more often!

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks a lot sweetie. Ohh we sure will, we already have a lot of collabs together ;-)

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