by Joseph Boadi
I have experienced and been there.you really painted a very colourful picture.nice piece |
by Krysten
Wow i really like this one. Another great job. |
by Aaron
Where did you have those problems? |
by nouriguess
Meh. I am done caring too. Why do they act so selfishly? Good poem. |
by Aaron
But then they want so much from you, this why I can't stand the average person |
by DeviousCharmer
Loved it , kinda made me think of my ex bff |
by L
This poem is so raw, it gave me the impression that it was more like a vent ,however, it's still a poem and it's good. The emotion is felt. To be more precise, the first part of the poem felt like anger or rather disappointment and frustration combine all together. |
Message is on point. Undiluted piece saying it all as it is. When you genuinely give in to it, you'll be taken for granted. When you don't, suspicions arise. How can one satisfy the other? Alot goes in before the real committment with the worthy one is a guarantee... Keep writing! :) |