Bound For Space

by Thomas   Aug 2, 2012


I love you
3 simple words
but they hold
so much weight
and even more
solid made commitments
Your perfect body
I will worship
every single day
Your strong spirit
I will nurture
in this way
Shove your confidence
Into a rocket
and send it
into outer space
Make it shine
between the stars
But your feet
I will keep
down on earth
Your bright smile
I will kiss
Your rolling tears
I will catch
with my fingers
So that those
precious water drops
never hit dust

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Nice piece!

    It's unique with the 3 words for each line, it ties in great with the "I love you, 3 simple words" idea... I'm glad that you kept that going.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I like this piece, and the creativity behind it...

    Three words in each line just as stated in the first three lines.. 3 simple words..

    I just have a tiny thing.. it's probably the way I read it, so I'm not sure but I feel that the sound of the word Rock at the end of the poem, disturbs the flow of this piece. Other than that I really liked this poem.

    or the word Hit... instead of Rock..

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