I like this piece, and the creativity behind it...

Three words in each line just as stated in the first three lines.. 3 simple words..

I just have a tiny thing.. it's probably the way I read it, so I'm not sure but I feel that the sound of the word Rock at the end of the poem, disturbs the flow of this piece. Other than that I really liked this poem.

or the word Hit... instead of Rock..

Nice piece!

It's unique with the 3 words for each line, it ties in great with the "I love you, 3 simple words" idea... I'm glad that you kept that going.