Suggestions in this stanza :

" It's against his nature
Against his state of mind
Cause all he thinks of
Is the here and now "

" Cause all he thinks of-"

----I feel changing the "of" to "About" would improve the flow of the poem.

'Cause all he thinks about
is the here and now

"All this is caused
By people and hurtful words
Reason to gaze at the horizon
And crawl into a shell"

All this is caused:

-----I feel that if you say "all of this is caused" will improved the flow of the poem. Just by adding an Of.

I am honestly becoming a fan of your work. You have ana amazing way of writing.

This piece is all mysterious and deep at the same time, and it flows with an ease. The openning stanza was so capturing, it just grabbed my attention to keep on reading. I wished it lasted longer cause I sure was lost in the atmosphere of it...

Perfectly penned Mr T :-)