Comments : Ms Black Widow aka Aracne

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    That was the poem of the highest scores of the first round in my contest. And if I could, I would vote for it too. I love your creative images and the way you used the terms. Not only in the right way, but in the perfect way.

    I loved this. Will nominate!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Oh, I loved how you used the black widow spider here Karla, giving her undertones of human nature. You have spun another masterpiece. Good luck in the contest!

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    A beautiful poem, from a pen inked with beauty.

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    I have never thought to write a poem about a spider. This was very clever. As others say, you have done a great job of personifying the spider...clever indeed

    I really liked how you closed the poem in the last two lines! Good job and good luck!

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    Amazing write, 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well done on this challenge, Karla. You show great insight in human emotions in your work and make the reader think:)

    Well done!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I hate spiders, but this is a masterpiece. I miss reading you.