Comments : IM NOT DEAD"

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    Clever...this took an unexpected turn. Only your former body is dead but you live on as will we all. You write:

    "Im not dead because i feel the wind as i raise up to the heavens." I pray this be so.

    p.s. I see two "that"s in line 2.

  • 12 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    This is such a beautiful poem i could read it over and over again great job :)