I Chose To Stay (Diminished Hexaverse)

I am not all that fantastic at interpreting poems but here goes:

'I saw the dark side of
your life, the twisted acts
that you marked every night.
And when you knew what I
saw you stood there in a
traumatized disbelief.'

^^ You've obviously discovered something about this person - a hidden identity,their true identity, their past, their skeletons as such..?

'That guilty sore in
your eyes, breathing a
sigh with no disguise,
standing there I can't
read what's in your mind.'

^^ 'guilty sore' leads me to believe, well one, it's true because they show their guilt clearly, but also that it was in the past because a 'sore' is usually the healing process. 'Sigh' leads me to believe that there is relief or perhaps resignation at its discovery?

'So scared to take
a step towards
me, for I may
run to be freed.'

^^This person is unsure if you will accept them, their truth, or if you will run away.

'But take a
deep breath and
come closer.'

^^ You are going to at least try to accept this person and their hidden truths.

'See, I
am still

Here!'

^^ clearly you chose to stay.

OVERALL;
Firstly, a fantastic effort on the style of poem! I have never seen this style before nor am I sure I could ever replicate it. You have managed to make it look effortless, when in fact that is surely not the case.

Secondly, this piece is really astounding. I think what the message behind this piece is that those who truly about you will accept you no matter your flaws..? Or similar to that anyhow..

Thirdly, don't change a thing! You have managed to perfect it already, so I need not offer any critiques. (:

Excellent. 5/5

This one is pretty cool, I have to try this form some day. You did a wonderful job.

Amazing! Wow it just so different. I thought at first (Diminished Hexaverse) was somewhat related to your title or poem until I found out it was a form of poetry. It also looks quite hard to pull off and not as easy as it seems by reading this wonderful work! I can appreciate the effort you put into this one.

Well done, thank you for introducing me to another form.

Like it!

I haven't ever seen this form before, so that's what drew me in ... and I'm so glad that I read it! I really love the message you captured.

Fantastic, great job. :)