Annoyed? (Cinquain-2)

I think it creative and scary at the same time. I have often felt like that, usually in the line at the grocery store ( there's a poem in there somewhere!). I say Bravo! Good luck in the contest.

Powerful write. In a way it is scary how the speed of this poem relates to the speed of someone being shot and how quick it can end their life. I actually really liked this and how you done it. Well done.