Okay, I'm glad you said that about the last stanza because I was going to say it was a typo, haha. I like how you included her name in the last stanza, that's sweet and shows that it is truly dedication to her. I'm sure if she ever gets the chance to read it, she will love it.

I do think adding some punctuation would help this piece flow better. It gives the reader an idea where to pause and stop. When I see no punctuation, I read it too fast and get confused.

Overall, a really nice love poem. Great job, Thomas. :)

Such a beautiful love poem, well worded and it flowed freely, my favourite line was the dancing like petals in the wind! Wow, such a powerful idea. Well done

Nice poem