This could be a love song. We say only love and love is more than only if that makes sense and your words express thoughts that I have had about loving someone. The feelings cannot be explained in mere words no matter how hard I try, they are feelings I never experienced and this poem reminded of those feelings Ray. Good job on this one.

A very sugary poem, with simple choice of words. 4/5

"On and on, only you and I." - Love the last line.

mandy :)