Interesting piece, little suicidal, but it's good. Very powerful. Good job. ((5))

Thanks for the comment but cancer is a pain in the but and its not about suicide, I'm just letting go of everything. Thanks for the comment although you think its about suicide.

Good piece. I like the rhyming way, except for the last two lines which donot rhyme. I suggest you improve the one before the last, ending with 'eyes'. For example
'as I close my eyes, not to see the light' or something like that. I enjoyed the flow 5/5

You better not go anywhere Mister...because I am right here Waiting for u: )