by Chelsey Aug 6, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Let's speak hypothetically for once |
by One Man Clan
Now what I admire the most here is your ability to speak to your readers while voicing your thoughts in almost every poem, That aint easy, takes both skill and practice and I personally try to do it as well, but not where near as good. |
by Darren
Nice flow, nice slower pace to reflect the hurt. There is great emotion in this. |
This poem simple but really pure in emotion I love the word choice and the flow was also good very nicely written :) |
by Tara Kay
:O WOW Chelsey, I am speechless, this piece completely tore me apart, the language was simple but actually was the best I have read from you, I think it holds so much meaning and that's why I love it so much :) |
by Meme
@_@ Chels *huuuuuugggggsssssss youuuuu* |