One Hell For Another

by Baby Rainbow   Aug 6, 2012


I sit here crying
wishing I was dying,
hating this world
that I live in.

I am not even living
I merely exist.
Invisible to most.
Forgotten by all.

Are you happy?
Are you proud?
Is this what you wanted?
Did you not take enough?
Did I not hurt enough?

I am breaking your rules,
I am breaking your silence.

I am released from your cage,
released from your prison,
released into my own world.

My own silence,
My own cage,
My own prison

My very own world of hell.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    "One Hell For Another" ... I really like that. Sometimes we feel like we are living in hell, only to be shown later on down the road that we left that hell to only be in another form of hell. I think that's what you tried to capture here. I'm not good at explaining sometimes, so sorry if that totally confused you. I know what I want to say, and then it comes out like blahhh lol.

    Anyway, this is good... I like the fast paced, simple wording and such.

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