I suppose Robert, this could be the actual aphodite or a very beautiful woman that you are comparing her to- but one thing is for sure..shes naked.

I would have liked to see other words here like: Nude, unclothed, bare, Au Naturel, exposed, etc.

It is always a treat to read your poetry Robert :)

I like this piece. It has good word flow and overall it's easy to read. Good job ((5))

I loved the use of a number of adjectives in this poem, well deserved for the Goddess of Love. This greek Olympian beauty has more beauty to her than one can define with the adjectives we can find in an ordinary dictionary. Wonderful personification.

Great idea for a poem robert,
What I would say is there seems to be a lot of commas, it breaks the flow up somewhat.

ex line 1
Rising, from the sea, Naked, a Vision, of Such Loveliness,

how about

Rising from the sea naked, a vision of such loveliness,

(I dropped half the capitals as well)

That aside, your passion for this is evident.
You use some strong adjectives that really show how you truly marvel over her.

regards.

Wow, I saw her as I read the poem..a rare beauty as they are not made anymore.

I agree with Darren on the comma's. I always wanted to tell you about it!

Well done, though:)

5/5 Ingrid

Thought I best re-read it as you have edited it.

It is very tight now, still exceptional descriptive narrative used, I know exactly what she looks like. It is almost a song now Robert

great write