Lost November

Great sorrowful piece! It took my heart away. Just I have some points to comment:
This is a sadness piece NOT a love piece so you have to change the category.
Walking in the woods outside in the snow
All I can do is Think of you
I think it will sound better if you change 'Think' to 'Thinking'

What could have been If we haven't lost november
The word november should start with a capital letter.
With you gone I learned the meaning of sadness for the first time
When you were here I learned what love was
'Love was' sounds better if changed to 'love meaned'
A tear slides down my cheek
'A tear slided ...'
About to relive our last moments together
Just to show myself it was real
I need to.....I need to do it to move on
I sit in the spot where so may times berfore you held my hand
I Can't do this not yet
I lay down in a blanket of snow
I lay there I must have fell asleep

'fell asleep' change to 'fallen asleep'
But I seen you in my dream
I tell you all the things I was afraid to say when you were alive

'But I saw you in .....'
If you're talking about things you saw in the dream then you should say:
'I were telling you all ....'

I really enjoyed reading the story which really touches the heart.

Beautiful written

Beautiful .. Really liked this sweetie