Comments : Quarter of a Poet (Double haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Hey Khal...remove "of" in your first stanza, it ahs 6 syllables..

    Wow I love this double haiku! Such kite runner pride. Thats amazing. Love the wording in this piece :) Congrats on your 100th poem hun!

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    A cocktail of feelings as
    A (1); cock (1) tail (1); of (1); Fee (1) lings (1); as (1)
    Poet (1)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    How sweet and congrats on your 100
    keep on

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    P.s I meant a quart poet...remove the of. Because I've asked around and poet is 2 syllables....really weird it tells you its 1

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Congrats on this, and well done as syllables are spot on.

  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Love it!

    Just one minor thing;
    Should there be a capital at the beginning of the second Haiku?

    Congrats on reaching 100! A proud moment I am sure.

    I love the phrase 'a cocktail of feelings' !!

    Great job! 5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Khalid M Darwish

      Thank you this means a lot to me. I hope you'll also reach the 100 poem stage.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Great Khalid, to get to 100 and turn out quality like this is no mean feat, works well and I live the detail and analogies in this.