Comments : Liquefaction

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    At this point in time I want to call you a crazy coffee freak addict! ( I knew you would giggle with that statement)

    You took coffee and melted the hearts of the reader... with your warm sensuality you have taken a creative metaphor to an extreme.... and I flipping love adore this piece! love it love it love it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    OMG!! I want a cup of coffee to concentrate right now, ok so I am gona go nuts in a second @_@

    Ohhh I warned you that I am going crazy so here is what I think. I think when Mr Right finally comes and decides to make you his wife he should propose to you like this:
    "Will you be my cup, my coffee, and forever my ice cube?" LMFAO :-P

    This was original, creative, and crazy goooooooood!
    You are one talented girl Chels <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    What a great write, I love coffee
    can't do without it, especially in the morning

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I've been loving your new pieces, Chelsey. This is so creative. I've always written about coffee, in the point of view of coffee, I've even wrote an ode to coffee O.o

    But this is just perfect and original. I love every bit of it. Nominated and going to my favorites for sure. Please keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Yay, this is so different. I really enjoyed this well done for this one. Now write one for Red bull and you have described all my mornings :p x

  • 12 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    What i love the most about what i'm seeing here is the originality of your thoughts
    you basically made a very creative poem from 3 items, Coffey, ice cube and cup, and not alot of people can do that. So i truly aplude you
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Coffee is such a wonderful Metaphor to write about, and I really adore the way this author created this piece. The beginning of this poem expresses her dislike for coffee, but then she adds the way this person makes her feeling and wraps her emotions within coffee itself...

    "I am the coffee.
    Guzzled down your throat and meeting
    butterflies in the bottom of your stomach
    As we both provide your dose of caffeine"

    The creativity of this piece really made me speechless... Love this stanza!

    I enjoyed this piece from start to finish! Well Done Chelsey