Flakes (Collab)

by Meme & Chelsey   Aug 8, 2012


Smells of bacon and eggs
taunt me, reminding me of
mornings spent with your eyes
wrapped around me. Now in my
bed til noon, indulging on my
usual; cornflakes. My appetite
now lost, although I admit I'm
still hungry for you.

My days no longer retain
their warm hues, they are
all cold .. all dark .. Just like
that winter night when you
decided not to trace your
warm finger across those
snowflakes on my lashes.

I'm often reminded of
your eyes in the remains
of clumped mascara
-demonic black.
Except your eyes did not
contain tears, unlike these
stripes that streak across
my glistened face.

So shall I call you now by
your first name Mr Heartache?
Or shall I just bow to your
pain? Because I can find no
other way for me to scrape the
flakey remains of my heart
from your floor..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By: Meme
And: Chelsey
~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Great job you two. It flowed so well, I would never have thought this was a collab. Hope to see more collabs from both of you. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Excellent job both of you, a very well put together poem. x

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Haha.. I mean the Phrase, is that a slogan

    "We are fast, we are bad and we are awesome".. a memorable phrase...

    The other thing about the cornflakes, I was just kidding lol..

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Luce, what're you asking darling? I'm so confused and your misunderstanding hahaha

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    "We are fast, we are bad, and we are awesome!"

    Is the above a new slogan? haha.

    This is well written girls, well done.
    Also did the cornflakes was because I misunderstood the contest about the snowflakes by the cornflakes lol

    I can't really guess who wrote which but I'mma go and say the first stanza was written by Chelsey.