Comments : Flakes (Collab)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wow meme...I give you an idea then whoop there's our poem...brilliant. really was.

    Id like to comment on your stanzas but that'd give away who wrote what and I like to leave people guessing....so, I will comment the whole thing

    I love the use of "hues" in this piece to describe lack of sunlight... And also that eyes were compared to mascara. Black eyes, just evil and creepy...

    The idea behind this poem is awesome.

    So fun writing with you! We are fast, we are bad, and we are awesome!

    Mwahhhh

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    The idea is awesome because the person who came up with it is AWESOME!!

    I loved writing with you, you are brilliant and this whole liece is brilliant.

    Yes we are!!!

    ;-)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    "We are fast, we are bad, and we are awesome!"

    Is the above a new slogan? haha.

    This is well written girls, well done.
    Also did the cornflakes was because I misunderstood the contest about the snowflakes by the cornflakes lol

    I can't really guess who wrote which but I'mma go and say the first stanza was written by Chelsey.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Luce, what're you asking darling? I'm so confused and your misunderstanding hahaha

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Haha.. I mean the Phrase, is that a slogan

    "We are fast, we are bad and we are awesome".. a memorable phrase...

    The other thing about the cornflakes, I was just kidding lol..

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Excellent job both of you, a very well put together poem. x

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Great job you two. It flowed so well, I would never have thought this was a collab. Hope to see more collabs from both of you. :)