Anthem of the angels

by Alanis   Aug 8, 2012


Sing the Anthem of the angels for her
Safe decent. From this world of rage
And hate. To bring her sweet eternal
Dreams. Dreams of wild fields of
Exotic flowers, sweet smells will
Fill her nose and bring her a
A beautiful smile. she will leave
This skin she hated for so long.
She will be nothing but a wreath.
So white and pure. She will gallop
Through elegant forests with unfathomable
Speed. Her world will be unethical to
Us simpletons. Her death is just the beginning.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    Another good one Chelsea! Check the "will" in the 3rd to last line...I think you meant "with."

    I did like the first line, set me up nicely for a journey with "her." So vivid the descriptions are in this...what she will be, have, do.

    Nice job! I liked this so much I thought I'd give you two comments!! :)

    • 12 years ago

      by Alanis

      Lol thanx for the thought:D

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Thank you :) that comment made my day :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Chelsea. I love this visual poem. Your words create very strong images. A very nice free verse
    poem def. worth reading!

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    The words here are powerful and well-expressed. You have made me wish these good things for "her" that you have so vividly written. I especially love the line:

    "She will gallop Through elegant forests will unfathomable Speed." (I think the 2nd "will" should be "with."

    I really enjoyed reading this one and thanks for some brevity at which I'm not very good!

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