Comments : Anthem of the angels

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    The words here are powerful and well-expressed. You have made me wish these good things for "her" that you have so vividly written. I especially love the line:

    "She will gallop Through elegant forests will unfathomable Speed." (I think the 2nd "will" should be "with."

    I really enjoyed reading this one and thanks for some brevity at which I'm not very good!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Chelsea. I love this visual poem. Your words create very strong images. A very nice free verse
    poem def. worth reading!

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Thank you :) that comment made my day :D

  • 12 years ago

    by BLBrown

    Another good one Chelsea! Check the "will" in the 3rd to last line...I think you meant "with."

    I did like the first line, set me up nicely for a journey with "her." So vivid the descriptions are in this...what she will be, have, do.

    Nice job! I liked this so much I thought I'd give you two comments!! :)

    • 12 years ago

      by Alanis

      Lol thanx for the thought:D