I like the way you repeated the title throughout the ending line of each stanza. It truly can resemble the way we think... We always like to wonder off in our thoughts but the underlying message keeps shining through every doubt and regret we have. I also found that the way you ended the poem was so powerful and it displays a change and a resolution to the questions seeming around through out the poem. The words you have selected truly convey they are deeply stitched by emotions of what you feel and the changing of life is portrayed clearly through each stanza I really liked this poem overall.
Thankyou for sharing your thoughts and allowing me into your mind!
5/5 from me!

Man,this poem is really so good ,i liked this work really a lot, u r such talented poet,keep it up Captain :)

Nicely done as usual. I enjoy your work, you've got real skills and talent. Beautifully written. Keep it up.
5/5

I really like this poem!!!!!!